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Navigate logical layers of code changes, visualize relationships, and explore their blast radius. 📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThis documentation-focused PR revises architecture, setup, usage, vector, and formal-model guides. It updates headings, links, lists, and examples, and clarifies several documented configuration and operating details. It also updates the walkthrough and demo content. No implementation code or runtime behavior changes. ChangesDocumentation updates
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- Line 136: Update the phase references throughout the architecture page,
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- Around line 327-328: Update the fidelity text around “CAS commit” to describe
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- Line 590: Make the standalone Iceberg demos in walkthrough_demos.md
self-contained by adding idempotent prerequisite setup before calls to
coldfront.create_iceberg_table and coldfront.ensure_attached, or include the
same initialization in shared setup. Ensure the documented path installs
pg_duckdb and coldfront and sets the SeaweedFS storage secret, matching
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Rebased from main and edited. Some fixes went to main directly in 9b9863b. Changed:
- Headings are Title Case with code names, extensions and pgEdge keeping their own case, and coldfront becomes ColdFront only where it means the product.
- One "Known Limitations" section works better as "Caveats".
- A list of phases must stay 0-5 to agree with the code.
- The walkthrough steps keep their numbers as "Step N:" and the table links to them.
- Bold labels became plain text except where they were real sub-sections.
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- Line 488: Rename the “Constraints That Are Correctness” heading to
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Summary
case (Title Case), missing lead-in sentences, ambiguous "it",
em-dashes in prose, misused numbered lists, bold text standing in
for headings, casual wording, product-name capitalization
(coldfront -> ColdFront), and inconsistent line wrap
theme's own sidebar TOC
usage.md's "Gotchas" heading to "Known Limitations" forconsistency with the rest of the doc set
walkthrough.md: setup/intro stays there, and all four demosmoved to a new
walkthrough_demos.mdpage (added tomkdocs.ymlnav). The 11 numbered "Step N" headings became gerund-style titles
linked from the summary table, dropping the redundant step-number
duplication between the table and the headings
architecture_vectors.mdandusage_vectors.md, whichhad never been wrapped to the 79-character house style
Test plan
mkdocs build --strictafter every batch of fixes - 0 warningsconventions (table intros, cross-links, heading anchors)
content (only line-break positions changed)