macOS向けのWi-Fiのページを最新のmacOS 26 / 15に対応させる#1990
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macOS26の手順（英語）
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全体的に
- 相対パスへの変更
- 画像と文言が異なる部分の修正
を行いました。
一度、市原さんの方でも確認をお願いします。
| <DeleteProfile userIdField="Account name"/> | ||
| Select the SSID found in Step 2 and then select “Forget This Network” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking “Forget Wi‑Fi “0000UTokyo”?” appears, select “Remove”. | ||
| <figure class="gallery">{:.medium.center.border}{:.medium.center.border}</figure> | ||
| Select the SSID you found in Step 2, and select the “...” icon on the right side. Then select “Forget This Network” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking “Forget Wi‑Fi Network “0000UTokyo”?” appears, select “Forget”. |
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""のなかに""が入ると少し見ずらいので、外側を''にしました
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| Select the SSID you found in Step 2, and select the “...” icon on the right side. Then select “Forget This Network” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking “Forget Wi‑Fi Network “0000UTokyo”?” appears, select “Forget”. | |
| Select the SSID you found in Step 2, and select the “...” icon on the right side. Then select “Forget This Network” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking 'Forget Wi‑Fi Network “0000UTokyo”?' appears, select “Forget”. |
Co-authored-by: Takayuki-max <7267289384@g.ecc.u-tokyo.ac.jp>
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見落としていた部分の修正提案を加えました。
英語版なのですが、astroを使用している関係で不定冠詞の誤りが散見されます（an→a）。
確認したところ、該当箇所のastroを修正するか、その修正によって他ページに影響が出そうな場合はastroを利用せず、その部分を書き直す、ということが必要になりそうです。
編集方針は市原さんにお任せしますが、軽微な修正なので今回のPRでは置いておく、という形でも大丈夫かなと思います。
| ### Step 1: Enable the Wi-Fi function from the taskbar | ||
| {:#turn-on} | ||
| To see the setting screen, select the “System Settings” from the Apple menu on the left side of the toolbar. Select “Wi-Fi” in the side bar and turn on the toggle switch to enable the Wi-Fi function. | ||
| To see the setting screen, select the “System Settings” from the Apple menu on the left side of the menu bar. Select “Wi-Fi” in the side bar and turn on the toggle switch to enable the Wi-Fi function. |
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| To see the setting screen, select the “System Settings” from the Apple menu on the left side of the menu bar. Select “Wi-Fi” in the side bar and turn on the toggle switch to enable the Wi-Fi function. | |
| To see the setting screen, select the “System Settings…” from the Apple menu on the left side of the menu bar. Select “Wi-Fi” in the side bar and turn on the toggle switch to enable the Wi-Fi function. |
| <DeleteProfile userIdField="Account name"/> | ||
| Select the SSID found in Step 2 and then select “Forget This Network” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking “Forget Wi‑Fi “0000UTokyo”?” appears, select “Remove”. | ||
| <figure class="gallery">{:.medium.center.border}{:.medium.center.border}</figure> | ||
| Select the SSID you found in Step 2, and select the “...” icon on the right side. Then select “Forget This Network” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking 'Forget Wi‑Fi Network “0000UTokyo”?' appears, select “Forget”. |
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| Select the SSID you found in Step 2, and select the “...” icon on the right side. Then select “Forget This Network” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking 'Forget Wi‑Fi Network “0000UTokyo”?' appears, select “Forget”. | |
| Select the SSID you found in Step 2, and select the “...” icon on the right side. Then select “Forget This Network…” on the displayed screen. When a screen asking 'Forget Wi‑Fi Network “0000UTokyo”?' appears, select “Forget”. |
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| * Enter the user ID and password for the UTokyo Wi-Fi account into the fields of “Account name” and “Password”. Note that they are not the regular ID and password for the UTokyo Account. You can check the user ID and password in the notification email described in the ”**Preparation**” step or the screen of the completed application. | ||
| * If there are any setting items other than mentioned above, please configure them as needed. If you have no particular preferences, you can leave the default settings. | ||
| * Enter the user ID and password for the UTokyo Wi-Fi account into the fields of “Account name” and “Password”. Note that they are not the 10-digit Common ID and password for the UTokyo Account. You can check the user ID and password in the notification email described in the ”**Preparation**” step or the screen of the completed application. |
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Preparationの部分は日本語版だとリンクになっているので、該当箇所へのリンクを追加したいです。
| * If there are any setting items other than mentioned above, please configure them as needed. If you have no particular preferences, you can leave the default settings. | ||
| * Enter the user ID and password for the UTokyo Wi-Fi account into the fields of “Account name” and “Password”. Note that they are not the 10-digit Common ID and password for the UTokyo Account. You can check the user ID and password in the notification email described in the ”**Preparation**” step or the screen of the completed application. | ||
| * If there are any setting items other than mentioned above, please configure them as needed. If you have no particular preferences, you can leave the default settings. For details, please refer to the [Apple Support page](https://support.apple.com/en-us/guide/mac-help/mh11935/mac). | ||
| * During the connecting operation, a screen asking if you trust the certificate may appear. To verify whether the certificate is correct, compare the "server fingerprint" of the displayed certificate with the fingerprint listed in 「[Connect Configuration](/en/utokyo_wifi/#connect-configuration)」. If they match, trust the certificate. |
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| * During the connecting operation, a screen asking if you trust the certificate may appear. To verify whether the certificate is correct, compare the "server fingerprint" of the displayed certificate with the fingerprint listed in 「[Connect Configuration](/en/utokyo_wifi/#connect-configuration)」. If they match, trust the certificate. | |
| * During the connecting operation, a screen asking if you trust the certificate may appear. To verify whether the certificate is correct, compare the "server fingerprint" of the displayed certificate with the fingerprint listed in "[Connect Configuration](/en/utokyo_wifi/#connect-configuration)". If they match, trust the certificate. |
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