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-Evora is the name of our Andor iKon-M 934 imaging camera. The Checklist steps you through operation. Remember to initialize the camera and home the filter wheel at the beginning of your session, and shutdown the camera at the end.
+The science camera is an Andor iKon-M 934 ccd named Evora. It's typically controlled from the left-hand computer using the Camera Control webpage. [The Checklist](checklist/) steps you through initialization, operation. Remember to shut down the camera at the end of each night.
 
 ### Things to Know
 The Camera Control software is under active development. At this time you should expect the following known issues:
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 - Multiple tabs do work, but do not expect the camera to do two things at once.
 
-- Every image is saved in a data directory assessible on Sleipner at [http://localhost/data/ecam](http://localhost/data/ecam).
+- Every image is saved in a data directory the is assessible, on Sleipner, at [http://localhost/data/ecam](http://localhost/data/ecam).
 
 ### Troubleshooting
 
-Restart the Evora server with:
+Evora and the Camera Control software have been fairly reliable, but in case of trouble restart the server on Sliepner with:
 
 `$ sudo systemctl restart evora-server`